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[The Legend of Gaia]

So-so and so on.

The story of the violin in the beginning is interesting, but you lose points when it shows that you (or the person that originaly created this) did not check your grammar for typographical errors thoroughly before submitting this. You didn't necessarily cut the violin and add it to flash correctly since the white outline around it coulbe easily be seen, it made it look very cheap and dropped the quality down another notch. Next time, try using the blur tool. I thought the music sounded familiar... it checks out: "El Mago de Oz" very nice. At first the art quality was a tad on the poor side, but the drawings of the characters looked pretty clean. In regards to your Author's notes: I thought this movie wasn't dedicated to the girl anymore? If that is so, then Why did you let the captions in the end stay? I am theorizing that this could be so you can let others show this flash to a beloved one if they want. Anyway, pretty decent movie over-all, not too shabby, you get a pretty decent score, of 3/5. Looks like it'll survive.

RadiCalvo responds:

He says:
With the grammar problem I'm Mexican, so the english it's not so easy for me, really sorry in that, the problem with the images (the violin) it's to make kind of "realism" because the principal part of the animation was the moon and the violin, I'm not very skilled in drawing and when I made this movie I was under time pressure and only worked well "my" character and the girl, about the music, yes, It's "Mago de Oz" I'm givin the proper credit in the profile of this movie, and the violin is a very remarcable instrument in the band, so I took this song (La leyenda de la Llorona) for this animation, It's the best critic I ever saw! I promise a better movie next time!!

Thanks!

[Internal Fires 13]

Aw damnit.

This would have been good, very good, if you had only not looped the end into perpetuity and have put a "play again" there. Never the less, it was an ok flash. Good sense of humor I guess.

csscblackbelt2000 responds:

Yes, this could have been a good flash movie.

But, I did not want it to be a good flash movie. I wanted it to be a good IF.

Thank you for the kind words of the last two sentences.

[:: Crazy Animation 2 ::]

Very shabby actually.

Well Mike Byers this was most-definitely interesting to watch... for the first 10 seconds, then it just sorta got repetitive (I thought the animation was supposed to be "crazy"). The problem with this movie was that it was way too over-simplified with the lines and stick figures and whatnot. Your inceasant use of a line looping around the screen continuously drops down the animation and style quality badly. The fact that you didn't let the song finish and just cut it out suddenly also drops down points in the sound category.

Omfgwtfbbqsauce-lawl responds:

Lol..

[Window Licker 01]

Eh, it's ok.

The animation in the beginning, before things got random and such, was pretty interesting to watch. It had an old-film kind of look, sort of like the look in "N" by Orange Clock. Just don't play out that look.

Coffee-lock responds:

Thank you, sir.

[Japanese VCR]

Ah, nice one.

Not quite as funny as the "why you kick my dog" sound bit, but this was funny none the less. Great animation to suit the dialogue.

just2pale responds:

that one is funny i just heard it now

[Waffle]

Anthony (TENT) Hurrell: Kickass animator.

Heheh, you're right, preloaders do suck, but it's the only thing that keeps us 56k (56gh3y) users entertained while we wait to see what's in store for us.

On to the movie: Right off the bat, the drawings were very good and vivid, even scarry in some points. I'm actually glad to see that you didn't include the lyrics to the song on the bottom in an annoying line like most wanna-be music videos do; instead you made them available separately at the end of the movie, big thanks to you on that. This is the way to do a good music video, it has good music quality, awesome graphics quality, artwork, and animation. Furthermore, the drawings do a good job of conveying a creepy feel through out the span of the animation. The lovely little bit in the ending adds humor points to this movie which boosts its score even higher, nice job. After watching this movie, I have concluded that your drawing style contains a very Ghost In The Shell-esque feel to it, that kicks massive ammounts of ass. You should consider working for an anime company or studio (that is if you haven't done so already).

TENT responds:

Thanks for the awesome review!! Well I do drawings for sex kitten sim dates! If that counts at all... yeah I put the music quality at 20kbs. I really can't stand 16! Sounds like dust! The most time consuming part of the artwork was getting the colours right. Some of the blood I think might be still to bright.

[Backyard Happenins]

Mediocre.

I think it takes a lot more than 4 independent muscles to pimpslap someone. Anyway, moving on to the movie, the bit on the wanted poster of the squirrel was pretty damn funny. Come to think of it, this movie wasn't too shabby in terms of animation and sound-effects, except for that one bit where the hotdog says "no" (at least that's what it sounds like he says) that was pretty weak, however, the lack of emotion in the voice actually contributed to making the scene funny. All in all, the movie was pretty pointless but interesting to watch none the less.

Tennessee-6 responds:

Yes your exactly right there was no "point" an yes the no was ment to be that way also the only sound clip I couldnot find so I had to create

[tradeoff]

NigaD this deserves an award.

This should have a green highlight over it in no time. The animation was smooth and wonderful, the music was very fitting, the sound effects came off without a hitch, and the writing wasn't terribly bothed or mis-typed. Awesome work bro, I hope to see your future projects here.

NigaD responds:

okay thanks dawg.

[Kung-Fu Vs Ninja Gaiden]

C'mon now.

The thing that knocked off huge points from this animation was... the lack of animation (I know it sounds redundant doesn't it?) Another thing was that when you zoomed in, the characters looked extremely blocky and pixelized, and I just can't score a flash seriously when a person does that. If you want to check out a sprite flick that I think me and my bro made decently (at least) look for Kingdom Sprites in NG.

VGD-Productions responds:

did you watch part 2 obviously they get much better from one to another. but thanks for the help and i sorta didnt want to smooth out the graphics on thomas i wanted to keep him looking like the old game.

[Chubaka Jam #2]

Another crappy Piconjo flash.

C'mon Piconjo, you can do better, stop screwing yourself in the ass with crappy flash movies.

Now for the critique: The first animation trying to poke fun at Legendary Frog'd flash concept of himself was pretty pointless because it was a standstill doing the same repetitive short motion. That seriously looked like it required no effort whatsoever.

When a person utilizes the rewind button the music keeps playing, that's a rather lame glitch. As far as the Anime Porn 2 bit goes, that also sucked.

The Madness Combat 5 bit was also lame, repetitive and flat-out uncalled for both with the gayness and plagiarism on the Madness series. Piconjo where's your originality?

Possible reason for shitty flash: You don't really <3 anyone, eventhough you claim that "Piconjo <3's joo" I think you just make these kind of flash movies out of inner-hurt towards NG for scoring other movies that were better than this with low scores. I'm sorry that happened.

Solution: You need to prove the people in NG (who doubt your true flash skill) wrong and start churning out better stuff than this.

Ogmz-Chubaka responds:

Yes, if Only I was Piconjo. I may be a Piconjer, but I don't even deserve to be called Piconjo. As for Piconjo's skills, watch the Naziground series, he shows it there you fucktard, Piconjo is probably the best artist on NG, but everyone blams his work because they are homosexual, so they get offended. :)